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Tuesday, 02 June 2009

  • not leaps and bounds....but inches nonetheless

    okay.  First of all, can I say that I wish I had someplace cooler to post my thoughts?  I mean, someplace that would be read?  never mind.  Clearly, my goal is to be published.  I'm a reader-whore.  The fact that I wish my blog got read is a clear indication.  It's actually both amusing and pathetic.

    Onto news. 
    1.  FIXED UP CHAPTER SIX!  Holy crap, I'm so proud of myself :)  :)
    2.  TOOK PICTURES IN ATLANTA!  So now I know where my story takes place, and I have no excuse not to finish chapters 1 and 2.  Except that I haven't figured out what Laura does with her life.
    3.  FOUND NOVELS LIKE MINE!!
          --Olive Kitteridge (Elizabeth Strout)
          --Our Kind (Kate Walbert)
          --Winesburg, Ohio (Sherwood Anderson)
          --What My Mother Doesn't Know (Sonya Sones)
          --World War Z (Mark Brooks)
      ...why is this important?  Because now I have something to structurally compare my novel to in a query letter.  So my novel doesn't look like the freak in the corner of the playground that no one talks to.  NO.  My novel is the little snot-nosed, pig-tailed kid who just knows she'll grow up to be just as cool as the PULTZER PRIZE WINNER, the OTHER AWARD WINNER, the CLASSIC REQUIRED READING, the SEQUAL PRODUCER, and the KICK ASS ZOMBIE BOOK WRITTEN BY THE SON OF THAT GUY WHO DID ALL THOSE MOVIES!  Yeah.  My novel thinks "screw all those other bleach-blonde fake-tan novels written in third person limited with only one or two or six main characters."  yeah.  My novel watches PBS and plays Settlers of Catan and watches Jeporady. 
    My novel is gonna rock out Gunn Hall when she grows up. ;)

    Also, I talked to my kinda-friend Beth (Fantasky, author of Jessica's Guide to Dating on the Dark Side).  She said, to the oddness of my novel,

    So I thought a lot about your problem, and I agree that you don't want to try to hide that your novel is different.  On the contrary, you have to really believe in the concept and sell it as something unique - yet  marketable - that people will be eager to read.  Have you thought about using the "Love, Actually" comparison to sell it?  Like it's "Love, Actually meets..."  Or, "It's like Love, Actually - only more..."  That can be a good tool, because every agent will know that movie and probably think, "Gee, that did well..."  Then you can explain how you've made that concept even better with your twist. 

    As for finding another work like it, or such a specific agent, I would focus on making the query as concisely intriguing as possible, then start sending it out again.  The rejections are terrible, but who knows... you might just pique somebody's interest and get a request for more.  I was intrigued!

    ...she was intrigued, and she thinks it has potential.

    Right now, I'm, to quote the Grimm Cinderella, a lazy slut.  I'm a pup scared of my own shadow.  I'm making up excuses.  I need to finish chapters 1 and 2.  I think I need to do a read-over one more time.  Just to make sure (and yes, to get me a little less scared and to waste a little more time).  And then I need to send it out again.

    Ten agents.  That's the goal this time.  10.  By June 15th.

    Not leaps and bounds....but inches nonetheless.

Sunday, 10 May 2009

  • Graduation

    So I graduated Saturday.  I mean, that really doesn't have much to do with my writing, but I feel uninspired to write here.  Hm.  Critque Circle is going well, I guess.  Really not much to report on the homefront.  Last chapter is solid (finally!).  I gotta spiff up chatpers 1,2, and 6.  I'm feeling better about 6, as though I can actually fix it (thanks to CC).  So those are the major improvements.  Thinking about sending it Jodie's way.  Thinking about editing.  Mostly thinking about how my phone charger is in one of the boxes behind me, and how I don't want to unpack...

Tuesday, 05 May 2009

  • complete clue III

    A LITTLE COMPANY IN THE END REPLETES THE WHOLE (8)

    a group of people fills you up = COMPLETE
    a little (com)pany = COM
    in the end (of) repletes = PLETE
    also means "the whole" = COMPLETE
  • Writer's Survey (21 Across)

    Hey Guys! I'm bored, and NOT writing, and so I figured it'd be fun to make up. I haven't found any online, just silly ones to "get to know" your characters. So this one is for you: the writer. Or the Writer Support System. In the header, call it "THE WRITER'S SURVEY (title of your novel). Have fun! Tag 10 people or whoever will most care about this kind of thing.



    1.) TITLE OF YOUR NOVEL? 21 Across

    2.) GENRE? Literary/Mainstream

    3.)DO YOU USE A PEN NAME? Nope

    4.)THINGS YOU NEED TO FIX (nessecery):
    *Ch. 1 -- Location
    *Ch. 1 -- Laura's Job
    *Ch. 1 -- Laura's Motivation --> desire for friends
    *Ch. 2 -- Location
    *Ch. 2 -- Time Constraints
    *Ch. 2 -- No Neighborhood Carolling --> move to chuch?
    *Ch. 6 -- The Whole Thing
    *Ch. 21 -- Crossword Puzzle Ending

    5.) THINGS YOU WANT TO FIX (not as nessecery):
    *Ch. 17 -- Stronger Plot
    *Ch. 15 -- Less Backstory? More?

    WHEN WRITING:
    6.) Songs For Writing? O.B.C. Wicked Soundtrack

    7.) Songs for editing? "Incomplete" CD, Backstreet Boys

    8.) Songs for finding agents? "Two Beds and A Coffee Machine", Savage Garden

    9.) Songs when you never want to write again? "Flightless Bird, American Mouth", Iron & Wine

    10). Songs for when everthing goes right? "Hooked On A Feeling", Blue Swede

    11.) Songs for when you get published? n/a

    12.) Songs to discribe your novel? Why? "Okay, Alright, You Win", Peggy Lee (song that inspires
    major plot point at the end) // "Jack and Diane," John Mellencamp (Jack = Grady; Diane = Penelope) // "Don't Stop Believing," Journey (No good reason, actually) // "Photograph," Nickleback (Grady to Penelope) // "Don't Stop Thinking About Tomorrow," Fleetwood Mac (Grady to Penelope)

    CHARACTERS:
    13.) Where Do Your Main Characters Names Come From? I needed names that went with their middle names, haha!

    14.) Did You Find Pictures Of Your Character? yep -- istockphotos.com

    15.) Favorite? Grady Davis.

    16.) Least Favorite? Diner Guy (aka Roger)

    17.) Most Like YOU? Rebecca Adams

    18.) Least Like You? um...I guess Lance

    19.) Created First? Grady Davis

    20.) Created Last? Joanna

    21.) Edited Out? Ashley Jones, Anne, Matt Martin, Benny Babigan, William McGallager, Wally (SO SAD!), some others...

    22.) Has The Best/Most Fun To Write Dialect? Grady's Dad? Ron?

    23.) Would Share a Taxi With? Chals. Hand's down.

    24.) Would Have A One-Nighter With? Also Chals? He's adventerous.

    25.) Would Kill? Ron Davis. Or, conversely, Wendy Davis.

    26.) Would Save First From A Burning Building? Grady. (oops, sorry Penny)

    27.) Try A Weird Food With? Chals.


    SETTING:
    28.) Where Does Your Novel Take Place? Altanta, apperantly. And Chicago, a little bit. And New York City.

    29.) When Does Your Novel Take Place? 1988 -- 2006

    30.) What Does The Setting Mean To Your Novel? It's convienient

    31.) Could Your Novel Take Place In The Past? Yes

    32.) Could Your Novel Take Place In The Future? maybe

    33.) Could Your Novel Take Place In The Present? yep

    34.) Could Your Novel Take Place In Another Country? no

    35.) Where Is Your Favorite Place In Your Novel? Liddy's kitchen!

    36.) Where Is Your Least Favorite Place In Your Novel? The Muralist's street


    SUPPORT SYSTEM:
    37.) Who Is Most Supportive? oo...hm. I guess Jilian [ see below?]

    38.) Who Knows The Most About Your Novel? Danielle or my dad

    39.) Who Believes In You When You Don't Believe In Yourself? Jilian :) :)

    40.) Who Buys You Your Coffee? no one -- Coffee's gross. But I had Chai tea with Tiffany at Gallery Row

    41.) Who "Tough Love"s You? Hipchen....sometimes, my mother, who reminds me of my slim odds and not to be suprised/sad with disappointment.

    42.) Who Will Read It First? My mom will buy it first. I don't know who will READ it first.

    43.) Who Do You Complain To First? EVERYONE! lol -- Jaimi, because she puts up with it!

    44.) Who Do You Cheer To First? Jaimi, same reason. Or my dad. Or Heather.

    45.) What Authors Have Most Inspired You? Well, literally, Ally Carter. And Jackson Pearce. And Kaleb Nation.

    46.) What Quote Has Most Inspired You To Write? "When I start a book, I always think it's patently absurd that I can write one. No one, certainly not me, can write a book 500 pages long. But I know I can write 15 pages, and if I write 15 pages every day, eventually I will have 500 of them." --John Saul

    47.) What Quote Should Start Your Novel? Lyrics to "Jack and Diane" AND (now) "Unless artists can remember what it was to be a little boy, they are only half complete as artist and as man." -- James Thurber

    48.) What Stores/Resturants/ect. Have You Written In? Barnes and Noble, Gallery Row

    49.) Who Is On The Dedication Page? My Parents, Chelsea Wickline, Danielle Davidson

    50.) What Does The Dedication Page Say? ooo. it's lame. I need to fix it. :P

Friday, 01 May 2009

  • complete clue, part II

    complete = finished.
    finish sounds like Finnish.
    Finnish for complete = täydentää.  Or  täydellinen.  Well that's not fun.  But I think I'm onto something related to Finland.  Anything good come out of Finland?  Or the Finnish language?

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  • As a joke, my "ideal" author paragraph: While I don't have a published novel, I do have heart. I ooze empathy and I'll do anything to stop one of my friends from crying. I believe laughter is sometimes a better alternative to Advil. This is the only dream I've actively persued in my life...I've attempted to achieve even at the expense of relationships, school, and friends. I've become popular at fanfiction.net AND at youtube.com. I've won 3 awards for nonfiction history writing. And I've been published in a literary magazine that I thought was entirely too full of themselves. ... But most importantly, I'm a Disney Trivia MASTER.